Last week’s post of the first few pages of a novel I’ve been playing with went down pretty well. (If you missed it, it’s introduced here.) I got a number of comments, both here and by email and Facebook, and they were universally good. Granted, the bulk of them came from friends and relatives, but hey, I’ll take what I can get.

Given that result, and a number of direct requests for more, I thought I’d post, well, a little more. And here it is:


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If you didn’t read the first one, I’ve made it easy for you: This is the complete Chapter 1, including what was posted last week.

As before, I would really appreciate your comments. Seriously. It’s not hard–I’ve even put a link in the PDF. Good, bad, or ugly, I’d like to hear your thoughts.